September 25, 2007

The Last Few Minutes Of My Life

I hid there behind thick undergrowth. I held my breath. I was praying along that those men with guns wouldn’t notice me. Someone fired in my direction. The first shot missed. Another shot was fired. It found me. I was hit on my leg. Pain seared through it. I tried to run, dragging my leg. I was unsuccessful. Usually very swift, and silent, I made too much of noise and couldn’t move. A third shot was fired. It found its mark on my back. I collapsed. I lasted long enough o see them coming out, cheering loudly, and saw them take out knives. I prayed that I should be the last of my kind to die. Slowly enveloped in darkness, I felt myself losing consciousness. And that was how my life as a deer ended.

10 comments:

anamika911 said...

wow. i love it. it's your best work yet.

Lakshmi said...

NOW ZIS....IS THA BESTEST

Anonymous said...

i like this the best.....

Vidyesh said...

its great!!
it really touched me!!

bharati said...

ouch
i luv this...
from a peta activist- you have put words into the mouth of a targetted deer...
AWSMMMM!!!!!

Priyadarshini said...

this one is the best....

Anonymous said...

he he i lik d deer part!!! i thought ull say its ur dream or sum thing in d end!!!!!!bt i lik d twist:):):)

Anonymous said...

this 1's the best!!!!!!!!it roxx.. nice usage of words!

sufina said...

really liked it....

Yuvi said...

Sad.

Minor Nitpick: When you are a deer, and you pray, who does the prayer go to? Deer God, for you to not die, or Man God, for them to not kill you?

P.S. Nicely written though - couldn't guess the animal bit until 'knife'.